Quote Originally Posted by Mr. Clean
gracias. i saw you lurking and was ready for your fixes lol. thank you. and everything that you pointed out is valid. the whole perspectives thing is tricky. our professor keeps telling us to try new things and doesn't grade us at all. she only makes sure we did it and checks up on our revisions to make sure we are taking everything into consideration. but i like one perspective and i'll probably change it as you did lol.
Yeah, you did third person in the whole story except for that one time, lolol. And I just caught that straight on, lolol. And I'm no English teacher.

Quote Originally Posted by PSINXS
no comma needed in the shuffling around the kitchen sentence.
I have to disagree. Without a comma, it looks like one long, run-on sentence. But as I said above, I'm no teacher. It just doesn't look or read right. Later, QD.