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[Killer]

Hello,
My name is Kyle Beavers, I’m 23 years old, and originally from the Blue Ridge area. I’m currently working in Atlanta for a dental software company, Ace Dental Software, as a software technician. I handle 75% of the incoming calls, shipping, packaging, answering questions, giving instructions, showing offices how to use our software, and always making sure our customers are satisfied.
I’m very anxious to learn more about the position and how I could join your team. I would love to speak with you over the phone or in person regarding how I could benefit your company. I can be reached at any time. My email is [email protected] and my cell number is 706-455-8270. I look forward to speaking with you.

Thanks for your time,

Kyle Beavers