why have we been over run with dumbasses lately?
why have we been over run with dumbasses lately?
dam yall still on this shit move the fuck on. its over with dam
Now this is the story all about how My life got flipped, turned upside downOriginally Posted by OUTLAW
And Id like to take a minute just sit right there Ill tell you how I became the prince of a town called bel-air. In west philadelfia born and raised On the playground where I spent most of my days. Chilling out, maxing, relaxing all cool and all shooting some b-ball outside of the school. When a couple of guys said were up in no good, Started making trouble in my neighbourhood. I got in one little fight and my mom got scared And said youre moving with your aunte and uncle in bel-air. I whistled for a cab and when it came near the Licensplate said fresh and had a dice in the mirror. If anything I could say that this cab was rare But I thought now forget it, yo homes to bel-air. I pulled up to a house about seven or eight And I yelled to the cabby yo, home smell you later. I Looked at my kingdom I was finally there To settle my throne as the prince of bel-air
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How about until you get your pennies together to buy the latest edition of "Hooked on Phonics" I will just help you with your 3rd grade spelling and grammar???Originally Posted by OUTLAW
Let's start class.....
DamN is spelled D-A-M-N, not "dam". Got it? Good.
The first letter of a sentence should ALWAYS be capitalized. For example, dam, which is misspelled and we've already gone over, should be capitalized along with "its". Which leads us right into our next part of this correction chapter, sentence rules. A logical and legible 3rd grade sentence should always have a subject and a verb. If you don't, it's an incomplete sentence. In this passage it is not as pervasive as in others I've seen from this douche bag, but it still bears reminding for his future reference.
Did I miss something?
Seriously, go buy "Hooked on Phonics". If it works on 7 yr olds, I'm certain it can help you......some.![]()
I concur, Professor CBR600. And might I add to this, mi dos centavos. The correct sentence structure should be as follows:Originally Posted by Jaimecbr900
Damn.
That would be the first sentence. Although not technically a correct sentence, it is widely accepted as such.
The second part of this literary abomination would be read as:
Y'all (are) still on this shit?
You need the word (are) in there to properly form the sentence. Although there is no question mark placed, it is through good, deductive reasoning that this is posed as observational query.
Next up in this wretchedly written wrath on English:
Move the fuck on.
Ok. This would be a proper sentence, just needing the M in move capitalized since we placed a question mark after shit.
And to the last part of the textually molested series of words:
It(')s over with(,) damn.
Ok. Being that we ended the previous sentence with a period, that would denote the start of a new sentence. This would mean a capital letter to be in the first word, it's. Also, it's needs an apostrophe in the contraction showing "it is." Afterwith you need a comma placed after with(lolol @ my pun). Then followed by damn with the correct inclusion of the letter N to let your readers know that we aren't talking about beavers or a means of blocking river flow.
Later, QD.
Fixed, mon capitan. lolOriginally Posted by quickdodgeŽ
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