here is my revision... let me know again what ya'll think.. i've tried adding the reason i was leaving my current job and tried to give a reason i could benefit the company...


Hello,

My name is Kyle Beavers. I am 23 years old and I am originally from the Blue Ridge area. Currently I work in Atlanta at Ace Dental Software as a software technician. I handle a majority of the incoming calls where I take care of customers’ questions and concerns. I also am responsible for the packaging and shipping of our product. I have been with Ace Dental for four years now and the experience has taught me a great deal, but I am looking to relocate to the North Ga. area once again.


I am eager to learn more about the position you have available. I feel as if I can be a vital part of your team as I have great strengths in the customer support field and completely understand the value of each customer in a business aspect. I can be reached via the email or phone number listed below. I look forward to speaking with you.

Thank you for your time.

Kyle Beavers
Email: [email protected]
Phone: 706-455-8270