As far as the editing goes you had smooth transitions and you did your titling well. The unsteady and out of focus cameras take away from the overall product though. I know you said only look at the editing side and I'd say for just starting out it was ok. Keep working at man and you'll rock it.

I have a project in the works, as you know , and when it eventually gets to editing I'll be sure to let you in on the fun.