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    Default Little help!

    It says post YOUR video here, SO here goes nothing.

    So check out:

    http://www.hotthrillerstar.com/video/194/Rock-N-Rolla

    Yes, thats me.

    Please watch my video... if you get a second, sign up and log in, leave a comment... saying you like it or I am funny or whatever you feel. (Please no negative.) I am trying to work with this company. Weird how you get to work with them, I KNOW. There are 2 other regular girls, I am in the running to become a regular, and the more positive feedback I get... the better!

    (The end of the video is the best. bwhaha)

    Thanks so much, please let me know you went and signed in or whatever and I will rep. you! This is GREATLY appreciated.

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    Okay...I will try to make this as positive as possible. You are cute, but you cannot read for shit. Please read for your own benefit, if you want this job that is....

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    I actually got better throughout the video. I can read really good, but was nervous as shit. You try that, in a bikini in front of like 15 other people.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    I actually got better throughout the video. I can read really good, but was nervous as shit. You try that, in a bikini in front of like 15 other people.
    It just starts to flow a wee bit better towards the end...not much. But some more advice, try not to read the words like they are your first time seeing them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    I can read really good, but was nervous as shit.
    That may be, but your english still sucks.

    *I can read really well.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ronsam2006
    It just starts to flow a wee bit better towards the end...not much. But some more advice, try not to read the words like they are your first time seeing them.
    Dude, thanks. Really. Means so much. I mean...

    This was a first take. All the other girls took 2 hours to do theirs, and kept dicking around as much as possible, mine took 30 minutes or less. Which is why they even want me. First take not TOO TOO bad.. they want to see reviews.

    Less time doing it, less they have to pay me, more reviews for them though.

    Anyways. Dont really care to hear how I read or how I should. Just asking for help. If you cant help or dont want to please dont even reply. Very simple. THANKS.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kyle
    That may be, but your english still sucks.

    *I can read really well.
    Its the internet.

    Serious bidness.

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    Umm...I know you Lea Anne, we're friends, but that shit came out really bad. You might try to watch "E" or something, because those girls have this shit down, and you're reading like a robot. The mannerisms all look over-exaggerated, and not believable. An acting class, or even something with public speaking would help a lot, because that video doesn't really make the cut IMO.

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    Alright.

    The parts where its over exaggerated... after everything was done, they went back in and put "emphasis" on a lot of the parts. So... yea dont know what to tell ya.

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    Well, if that's what they told you to do, then they suck at what they do, because it's not believable whatsoever. You talking normally/naturally, that's good, but "robot Lea Anne with over-exaggerated programming" is total shit. Even Charity, who wasn't very good either, looked way more at home doing that stuff. Just watch some tape, do some homework on it, and study people who are on network TV, because they would NEVER get away with takes like that.

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    10-4. Thanks.

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    Dumbass attention whore at it again.

    Quote Originally Posted by rep box thingy
    You must spread some Reputation around before negative repping fawk_you again.
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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    Its the internet.

    Serious bidness.
    Sorry but that doesn't apply.

    You can't attribute improper grammar to your medium of communication, you can attribute it to being a dumb skank who tries to earn a living by wearing a bikini and reading a teleprompter poorly...
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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    Dude, thanks. Really. Means so much. I mean...

    This was a first take. All the other girls took 2 hours to do theirs, and kept dicking around as much as possible, mine took 30 minutes or less. Which is why they even want me. First take not TOO TOO bad.. they want to see reviews.

    Less time doing it, less they have to pay me, more reviews for them though.

    Anyways. Dont really care to hear how I read or how I should. Just asking for help. If you cant help or dont want to please dont even reply. Very simple. THANKS.
    Don't get mad at me...I'm telling you in straight forward what Sleeping Talon is telling you nicely. On a more serious note though, just take some public speaking classes and read more books, it really helps.

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    HAHA, i love the end =)

    next time you should tell them to give you a script of exactly what you'll be saying so it will flow better.

    it's hard as fuck saying exactly what you're reading & making it look like you're just pulling it out of your ass ... so not bad!


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    Quote Originally Posted by toxxxic
    HAHA, i love the end =)

    next time you should tell them to give you a script of exactly what you'll be saying so it will flow better.

    it's hard as fuck saying exactly what you're reading & making it look like you're just pulling it out of your ass ... so not bad!
    They sent me a script but my computer locked up and my mom took it in to get repaired. Didnt have a choice but to NOT study. heh And yes... it was hard trying to make it look like it wasnt so pulled out of my ass. haha thanks though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    They sent me a script but my computer locked up and my mom took it in to get repaired. Didnt have a choice but to NOT study. heh And yes... it was hard trying to make it look like it wasnt so pulled out of my ass. haha thanks though.
    no i meant like its hard to look like you're just rambling naturally - which is a good thing! pulling it out of your ass is good! lol


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    Quote Originally Posted by toxxxic
    no i meant like its hard to look like you're just rambling naturally - which is a good thing! pulling it out of your ass is good! lol
    True that. Thanks chick.

    By the way... here is a little LOVE for the haters. Keep on...



    whatevvv

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    LoL cheesy-ness

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    Cheese is good.

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    Not bad at all!
    I love the ending the best lol! puts a new meaning in your IA name lol!

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    You need a little work, but better than I could do even if I was fully clothed, so props for that. Just keep practicing and good luck with it.

    ^^ Yeah, I drew a frame of a man running on each fan blade. That is him running at idle

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    are you trying to pursue something like this seriously? Or you're just interested in this opportunity?

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    Quote Originally Posted by tony
    are you trying to pursue something like this seriously? Or you're just interested in this opportunity?
    Opportunity at the moment. Who knows I may get good? Shit does happen.

    Thanks for the positive stuff up there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    By the way... here is a little LOVE for the haters. Keep on...
    By the way... there is a big difference in "hating" and reality.

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    Your body is SPICEY!!!! other than that it sucked.
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    HOLY GODDAMN FUCK MY MOTHERFUCKING EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I can't fucking believe I took a chance with my 20/20 vision and clicked the link. I thought this hogwash would feature AW#1 in an interview type thing. WHAT IN THE GODDAMN FUCK!!?!?!?!?!?!/

    Now I have to go to church this Sunday and re-save my eyeballs, retinas, the whole damn nine. DAMMIT!!! Later, QD.
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    Quote Originally Posted by quickdodge®
    HOLY GODDAMN FUCK MY MOTHERFUCKING EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I can't fucking believe I took a chance with my 20/20 vision and clicked the link. I thought this hogwash would feature AW#1 in an interview type thing. WHAT IN THE GODDAMN FUCK!!?!?!?!?!?!/

    Now I have to go to church this Sunday and re-save my eyeballs, retinas, the whole damn nine. DAMMIT!!! Later, QD.
    Hahahahahahahahaha......I'm falling of my chair...

    Reps+

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    Damn that was a lot of reading they made you do. Truthfully the content didn't interest me so I kinda flopped through it till I got to the bloopers.

    You could have went to the public library or a friends house to get the script they emailed you, that would have helped you out a lot.

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    Quote Originally Posted by quickdodge®
    HOLY GODDAMN FUCK MY MOTHERFUCKING EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I can't fucking believe I took a chance with my 20/20 vision and clicked the link. I thought this hogwash would feature AW#1 in an interview type thing. WHAT IN THE GODDAMN FUCK!!?!?!?!?!?!/

    Now I have to go to church this Sunday and re-save my eyeballs, retinas, the whole damn nine. DAMMIT!!! Later, QD.
    Lol. Well let's analyze this QD.

    You must meet at least two of these requirements to do what she's trying to do:
    1. be hot
    2. be outgoing
    3. Literate

    As far as I'm concerned she only loosely fits each of these and thus should consider alternate career opportunities.

    So let's see what he skill set is.

    1. Human
    2. Doesn't care if she makes a living doing a job that reflects no intellectual capacity
    3. Is willing to try to capitalize on her looks not talent to make money
    4. Judging by certain pictures of her may lack self respect

    Furthermore I say she considers becoming a stripper or an assembly line worker.
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    do it topless. itll be perfect then

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    damn yall really think she is that bad???? i didnt see it!!! lemme ask this!!

    how many times have u done that????....1

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    Oh snap, in for autograph for when you're famous.... LOL @ the end though..

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    Quote Originally Posted by blackboi50
    damn yall really think she is that bad???? i didnt see it!!! lemme ask this!!

    how many times have u done that????....1


    I have done it a few times with no time to think on what I'm going to say....A camera crew came up to me at a show and started interviewing me within 5 mins of me getting to know me. Its not easy but I felt i did alright




    Your Watching Car Stereo TV! My interview at a show...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nittanys1


    I have done it a few times with no time to think on what I'm going to say....A camera crew came up to me at a show and started interviewing me within 5 mins of me getting to know me. Its not easy but I felt i did alright




    Your Watching Car Stereo TV! My interview at a show...
    damn travis!!!! u damn showstopper!!!! ........

    but doing those kinda interviews are different from what she did!!!......like they said she was reading!!!!!!

    i wanna try doing that teleprompter thing!!!!......but of course not in a bikini ......1

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    ^lol yeah i wasnt reading anything...made it somewhat easier

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nittanys1
    ^lol yeah i wasnt reading anything...made it somewhat easier
    yeaaa!!! i can rat out all of the audio components in my car 2!!!!.......

    we all know u cant read neither ......1

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    Quote Originally Posted by blackboi50
    damn yall really think she is that bad???? i didnt see it!!! lemme ask this!!

    how many times have u done that????....1
    Just once.

    Thanks for the compliment.

    If I had actually been able to study the review, I would have been fine. But alas my computer was being repaired and I didnt even get a chance to glance over it.

    Whatever though.

    Seems that asking for help these days is way too over rated.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fawk_you
    Just once.

    Thanks for the compliment.

    If I had actually been able to study the review, I would have been fine. But alas my computer was being repaired and I didnt even get a chance to glance over it.

    Whatever though.

    Seems that asking for help these days is way too over rated.
    What do you want me to tell you....take a public speaking class, or record yourself speaking something on a camera and go over it....

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    ill have to agree with the majority

    The thread title is "Little Help" and i think thats what people are offering.

    It seemed way to rehearsed, like you were forcing it, and it wasnt convincing. almost robotic.

    The girl that did Quantam of Solace review was much more fluid IMO DIdnt seem as if she was reading off a prompter.

    Im sure nerves plays a big part so yeah, not everyone can pull it off. you should act like did at the end, not caring and it prob would have sounded alot better.

    If you want to do this kind of stuff you prob should buy a camcorder an practice in front of it.
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