Well, if that's what they told you to do, then they suck at what they do, because it's not believable whatsoever. You talking normally/naturally, that's good, but "robot Lea Anne with over-exaggerated programming" is total shit. Even Charity, who wasn't very good either, looked way more at home doing that stuff. Just watch some tape, do some homework on it, and study people who are on network TV, because they would NEVER get away with takes like that.