Okay I would do this for anyone that posted pictures... but to be honest, if these were the photos you recieved after payment, id be demanding some money back.
Looking at the photos more, I notice shadows after improper use of flash, spots on the white screen, mat lines from where she was sitting, and poor use of whatever software being used for saving these photos. All little things that a pro would know to look for during a shoot. The colors seemed washed out. The reds arent red, the blues arent blue...just lack of depth overall...
Once again, im not trying to rip on someone elses work, just providing some constructive opinions.