Man Vs. Bear. All feeback welcome.

[savincent]

Amen to that. amazing essay dude i believe every word of it. but i believe in the fact that all middle to lower class are slaves in the working force watch zeitgeist if your into watching documentaries it opened up my eyes to everything.

Appreciate it man. As for the movie, my cousin has told me about it. I just haven't had time to actually sit and watch it.

I don't know the purpose of this essay but profanity is typically frowned upon in intellectual writing. You switch perspectives and there are many grammatical issues.

As far as writing content and style...

The subject material is clear but I wouldn't just sling opinion around without some kind of backing. You generalize far too much for me to take the content seriously.

The purpose? This is just like a little warm up before I start working out, before I go into the cage. Can't go into a fight pulling muscles and over stretching your body. You'll inevitably lose!

I'm feeling the criticism though. For being too general, I tend to see things as a whole. I don't really like to "pick on" one thing, unless I have to.

Anyways thanks to both, keep the feedback coming.