you can tell where you stopped writing and where you cited books....
you can tell where you stopped writing and where you cited books....
yea thats were I got tired .. but, THANKS SOO MUCH I REALLY APPRECIATE IT!!!!!Originally Posted by Romeyo07
don't know if Romeo already fixed it, but alot of those smaller paragraph's can be pull into others to make a bigger one. ALOT of comma use...too much I'd venture to say.
Also, just a known fact....I did not see any, but remove the word "that" from papers...English professors hate the word. Also, "isn't" = "is not" just go back and re check it and spell each word out. Also, are you following MLA guidelines? if so, you might want to re-do your works cited.
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You were offering $100 bux to make it, how about a coupon or something for cleaning it up? Shoot, wash my car or something.
jk, but if you feel inclined to do any of the above, pm me. k thanks
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