[QUOTE=quickdodge®]The comma behind cheaper is not required. It would actually look cleaner without it.




After the word Semiconductor, you should place a period. That seems to be more of an independent sentence than an independent clause.




A comma is needed after "From this date forward."




Again, no comma needed after power hungry.




Just noticed a typo. "on the other [ital]HAND[/ital]. A comma after circuit, also.


[QUOTE=chuck] The impracticality of a five pound, carry along hearing aid may seem a bit overboard, but in reality it was once the direction of the industry to develop such a groundbreaking gadget.

I don't believe you need a comma after "five pound."


You type a very good, informative report. I think you should get a really decent grade for it. Job well done. Later, QD.


hey thanks man, that alone probably saved me a letter grade! i dunno why i always put a comma in a list before the "and", but everyone always says something about that...lol

on that last bit about the five pound hearing aid do you know if i would be allowed to say "...five pound carry-along hearing aid..." i don't really know the rules on that but i had put the comma in there to try to group the words that went with one another, but i dunno