Two things wrong with this:
1. This is not taking place in the evening. You distinctly stated morning in the opening line.
2. You mentioned something about funny yet forgot to insert it in the joke.
Later, QD.
Two things wrong with this:
1. This is not taking place in the evening. You distinctly stated morning in the opening line.
2. You mentioned something about funny yet forgot to insert it in the joke.
Later, QD.
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