No disrespect to the owner but calling a 13 second car a monster is a stretch LOL

The verbiage isn't bad, it isn't great either. This is one part of my full time position that I struggle with myself and I understand it does take skill and talent to produce a properly written and interesting article on a car. Keep at it and I'm sure you will progress. Don't ask for exact critiques because I can't put my finger on it lol