Quote Originally Posted by simontibbett View Post
I like the car, I think it's just hard to really capture the reader's attention with articles like this, it may just be me. I've never been a fan of reading articles on cars that aren't driven. For example I love reading EVO or Top Gear reviews on cars but when I use to read "tuner" type magazines could never get into the articles just telling us what someone did to their car.

The writing itself is fine.
I know what you mean. I think unfortunately no matter what you do with this "genre" it's kind of cut and paste, and unfortunately I'm not in a position were people are going to let me kick the shit out of their cars (I'd be all for it though). That's why I tried to write funny/entertaining whether or not it comes across that way. That's also why I like cars with personal history as opposed to x rich guy who just bought x car, built it with x parts and now makes x power (which seems to be the rinse and repeat formula for most tuner magazines these days).

Sorry if that was long winded, but I really do appreciate your feedback.