Boring in what way? Tone? Car? Please try to be as constructive as possible because this is after all an effort to have fun and improve my writing.Originally Posted by simontibbett
Boring in what way? Tone? Car? Please try to be as constructive as possible because this is after all an effort to have fun and improve my writing.
I like the car, I think it's just hard to really capture the reader's attention with articles like this, it may just be me. I've never been a fan of reading articles on cars that aren't driven. For example I love reading EVO or Top Gear reviews on cars but when I use to read "tuner" type magazines could never get into the articles just telling us what someone did to their car.
The writing itself is fine.
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