Athens Area Meet!!! 12/3/2007

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He could have if he spelled sentence wrong. Lolol.

On his defense, he did do the right thing with capitalizing the "C." If it were done correctly, there would've been a period after the word sir.

Other than that, nice, amateurish own. Later, QD.

Uh-oh it's on now.

"Would" would be a better alternative to "could", although both are grammatically correct.

"Sir" should be in quotation marks.

"Were" should be "was" as it is referring to a singular object.

The sentence "Other than that, nice, amateurish own" should be "Other than that, nice amateurish own". The reason for this is that "Other than that amateurish own" does not make sense; removing the "nice" part must still result in a correct sentence, which it does not.


Edit: I spelled sentence wrong, again. lol.