***EP3- Criticism Requested***

[Mr. Clean]

1) good lighting and white balance. really odd angle on the car. when you're working in a bland industrial center you have to make stuff interesting. just keep that in mind

2) if you were going for an editing effect... it didn't really work. it just looks like the picture was taken at the wrong white balance. and the car is waaay to close and cropped odd. it's too far in the frame for a decent crop, we're just expecting to see the car and we don't lol.

3) good angle but the car is just too close and again with the odd crop. when it comes to cropping... you just have to feel it. you just have to know when you're looking through the camera what looks appealing and what doesn't. had potential to be the best picture though.

4) pretty good picture. actually liking the grass and the skyline, just a little too dark. actually i will dub this as the best picture of the set.

when it comes to photography you just really have to intuitively know what is appealing and what doesn't. i think you're getting there, but you just need some technical work.

[Drew]

1) good lighting and white balance. really odd angle on the car. when you're working in a bland industrial center you have to make stuff interesting. just keep that in mind

2) if you were going for an editing effect... it didn't really work. it just looks like the picture was taken at the wrong white balance. and the car is waaay to close and cropped odd. it's too far in the frame for a decent crop, we're just expecting to see the car and we don't lol.

3) good angle but the car is just too close and again with the odd crop. when it comes to cropping... you just have to feel it. you just have to know when you're looking through the camera what looks appealing and what doesn't. had potential to be the best picture though.

4) pretty good picture. actually liking the grass and the skyline, just a little too dark. actually i will dub this as the best picture of the set.

when it comes to photography you just really have to intuitively know what is appealing and what doesn't. i think you're getting there, but you just need some technical work.

Thanks man. This is exactly what I was looking for. This was my first time of doing a sort of "shoot" so any other tips are greatly appreciated. Im still trying to understand all the technical stuff. Thanks again
-Drew

[Doppelgänger]

1) good lighting and white balance. really odd angle on the car. when you're working in a bland industrial center you have to make stuff interesting. just keep that in mind

2) if you were going for an editing effect... it didn't really work. it just looks like the picture was taken at the wrong white balance. and the car is waaay to close and cropped odd. it's too far in the frame for a decent crop, we're just expecting to see the car and we don't lol.

3) good angle but the car is just too close and again with the odd crop. when it comes to cropping... you just have to feel it. you just have to know when you're looking through the camera what looks appealing and what doesn't. had potential to be the best picture though.

4) pretty good picture. actually liking the grass and the skyline, just a little too dark. actually i will dub this as the best picture of the set.

when it comes to photography you just really have to intuitively know what is appealing and what doesn't. i think you're getting there, but you just need some technical work.

Same stuff I was going to say when this first got posted..but alas, I has no "photography credz" so I just waited for someone who all of you know to post