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Genji-Sama
12-01-2010, 01:23 AM
Always had a moderate interest in photography and I know little of anything other than how to point and shoot and use rookie editing software, but I did this and was kind of proud of it, but know it could be better. So I'm lookin for help on gettin that way. I edited out some tiny stuff, cleaning some spots on the car eliminated teh reflection of the light post on the hood, the antenna, simple stuff then started playing with the lighting and other things.
Before:
http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Genji-Sama/116.jpg
After:
http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Genji-Sama/CleanupDstanglit.jpg

iamdallas
12-01-2010, 01:28 AM
Criticism? You can to the right place. I'm sure there will be plenty to come. lol

But I think you edited too much of the reflection away on the headlights. It doesn't look completely real. But overall it looks good.

Editing photos is just like painting a car. You have to start with a smooth base. If you start with better photos, your editing will be less of a load and the resulting product will shine. The original foto of the Stang wasn't that great so just take the time to get a good shot. AND CLEAN THE CAR

You might also want to level the car out. The angle is awkward.

Hope that helps.

Genji-Sama
12-01-2010, 01:36 AM
Criticism? You can to the right place. I'm sure there will be plenty to come. lol

But I think you edited too much of the reflection away on the headlights. It doesn't look completely real. But overall it looks good.

Editing photos is just like painting a car. You have to start with a smooth base. If you start with better photos, your editing will be less of a load and the resulting product will shine. The original foto of the Stang wasn't that great so just take the time to get a good shot. AND CLEAN THE CAR

You might also want to level the car out. The angle is awkward.

Hope that helps.

Thanks, would rep u but gotta spread it around.

jdmshytyo87
12-01-2010, 01:37 AM
looks like shit hahaha. just another black ride.... old news.. next. o i see that u zoooomed in to lol later....

-EnVus-
12-01-2010, 01:41 AM
looks like shit hahaha. just another black ride.... old news.. next. o i see that u zoooomed in to lol later....

He was talking about his photo skills not the car ass clown

Genji-Sama
12-01-2010, 01:42 AM
looks like shit hahaha. just another black ride.... old news.. next. o i see that u zoooomed in to lol later....

Reading > you

boostedb16
12-01-2010, 01:44 AM
you got to start somewhere. but this really is a bad picture to begin with. like the first reply said, find a better subject and go from there. you can still see where the light pole was in the hood but that also takes practice.

Nemesis
12-01-2010, 08:42 AM
I think that noob should wash his car, and you should sell the camera!!!!!

Nemesis
12-01-2010, 08:43 AM
I mean, great pics bro. :3

Thegrizz
12-01-2010, 08:46 AM
"He was talking about his photo skills not the car ass clown "

:lmfao:HAHAHAHAHA

DustnU
12-01-2010, 09:09 AM
looks like shit hahaha. just another black ride.... old news.. next. o i see that u zoooomed in to lol later....

looks awesome my car looks like shit hahaha. just another ugly girlie teal Ef... i need to get a life.. next. o i see that u zoooomed in to sweet later....

FIXED!!!! LOL

Genji-Sama
12-01-2010, 01:47 PM
I think that noob should wash his car, and you should sell the camera!!!!!

He didn't know I was gonna take a pic of his car that day (neither did i), I just came back from classes one day and he was parked next to me, so I snapped it. Tho he still needs to wash it and I like my :camera:, so no sell

jdmshytyo87
12-01-2010, 02:00 PM
i love it lol great job...he is the one wanting the criticism lol i was just helping out with my point of veiw lol. dont post if you dont like what people say lol hahahahaha. plus i like my free car ass clown, won this in a race boss man,....

Genji-Sama
12-01-2010, 02:12 PM
i love it lol great job...he is the one wanting the criticism lol i was just helping out with my point of veiw lol. dont post if you dont like what people say lol hahahahaha. plus i like my free car ass clown, won this in a race boss man,....

Once again.....Reading > you

Just to state this more clearly so you don't misunderstand the purpose of this thread, once again. I want criticism on the photography and editing, not the car. It's not my car, I barely even like the car. I don't give two civics what you have to say about the car, only what you have to say about the photography.

jdmshytyo87
12-01-2010, 02:16 PM
well i was considering both in my statements lol.so take as you will.....

1moreaccord
12-01-2010, 03:48 PM
looks like shit hahaha. just another black ride.... old news.. next. o i see that u zoooomed in to lol later....

^^ Fail.

Genji - You need to do one of your car! Since I been on last looks like you updated ur sig with some new wheels, removed wing? I like it. Unless its old, then nvm lolol.. either way, show it off!

alpine_aw11
12-01-2010, 03:52 PM
i love it lol great job...he is the one wanting the criticism lol i was just helping out with my point of veiw lol. dont post if you dont like what people say lol hahahahaha. plus i like my free car ass clown, won this in a race boss man,....

If you want to lose that cute little car in another race, my grandma is pretty fast with her walker. Probably faster than that thing is.

jdmshytyo87
12-01-2010, 04:21 PM
lol you must be the shit talker online dude hahahaha and your prob right she might be faster but this car was dudes dd not the one he was racing, i didnt want the molested PEACE HE WAS DRIVING its easy to TALK shit online or on the phone but when it comes down to it more times than none you will never talk that shit to someones face, but you might i dont know you, i do kmow it takes alot of nerve to put your pink slip down dude so talk is cheap,,,,,,

revenge
12-01-2010, 05:10 PM
this thread is going no where.but great work though.

jdmshytyo87
12-01-2010, 06:04 PM
Cant lie you did take alot of the dirty off it, and sorry for bashing you i dont even no how to use photoshop, so sorry bro, do what you do...

Genji-Sama
12-01-2010, 06:24 PM
^^ Fail.

Genji - You need to do one of your car! Since I been on last looks like you updated ur sig with some new wheels, removed wing? I like it. Unless its old, then nvm lolol.. either way, show it off!

Eh, i would, but it's not worth showin off. I've been working on a lil secret for a while, when that's done i'll take pics of both of them.


If you want to lose that cute little car in another race, my grandma is pretty fast with her walker. Probably faster than that thing is.

el oh el


this thread is going no where.but great work though.

thanks


Cant lie you did take alot of the dirty off it, and sorry for bashing you i dont even no how to use photoshop, so sorry bro, do what you do...

Didn't see that comin', thanks

iamdallas
12-02-2010, 03:17 AM
Thanks, would rep u but gotta spread it around.

No problem, just trying to help. I could hook you up with Photoshop 4 if you're familiar with computers/software. The only thing is we don't have any common ground. Tis a pretty big file so I can't just email it to you. If you're interested I'll try to find a way to get it to you... but it's a PITA to install because... yeah. PM me if interested.

jdmshytyo87
12-02-2010, 10:35 AM
ya dude i just stopped and was looking at what i was saying lol, i have no room to down something you would walk all around on. im no photographer. be any means lol. but dudes granny must have nos rnning up her nose insted of oxygen lol