I need your opinions for my detailing flyers

[Sammich]

*Edit* sorry i meant to make a poll, can a mod make a poll please?

Some anonymous person has been giving me some help, i just wanted to know which one you think is best..personally i'm loving #4, then #1

BTW yes i did get consent from Ed to use his pic

Option 1


Option 2


Option 3


Option 4

[Sammich]

someone hit me up w/ some thoughts

[LizBiz]

4 all the way! Nice!

[Sammich]

thanks liz

[NVEOUS]

I like #4 but #2 may catch peoples eye more with the color and all

[Sammich]

thats what the creator said about #2, but i feel its a little...gendery...on the female aspect. i want a generic flyer thats pretty simple, but thank you for your vote.

[Shawna]

#2

[Sammich]

you would

[Shawna]

Yes I would

[Sammich]

2 - #2
2 - #4

[AirMax95]

#2, but with a different color combo and removal of the stars.

How are these going to be printed?

[Shawna]

on paper

[Sammich]

#2, but with a different color combo and removal of the stars.

How are these going to be printed?

what colors are you thinking about?

[NVEOUS]

I would change the colors of #2 also but not sure to what.

[LeX]

4 then 1 like u said

[keevo54]

the mad....the crazy....re think the names they are terrible and will scare a customer.

#4 is the cleanest looking

[LeX]

blue and black on 2 make me want to throw up.. think of a lighter blue mixed with a different color for text

[Sammich]

name of the business is mobile madness detailing

2 - #2
4 - #4

[AirMax95]

what colors are you thinking about?

Opinions Below

1) A lighter blue, or
2) Flip the blue and white; reader will be more inclined to READ the offerings or
3) Same layout, with bordering of #4

It will give the flare for attention, but keep it professional for the iffy customers.

[NVEOUS]

Opinions Below

1) A lighter blue, or
2) Flip the blue and white; reader will be more inclined to READ the offerings or
3) Same layout, with bordering of #4

It will give the flare for attention, but keep it professional for the iffy customers.

Agreed:goodjob:

[Sammich]

Opinions Below

1) A lighter blue, or
2) Flip the blue and white; reader will be more inclined to READ the offerings or
3) Same layout, with bordering of #4

It will give the flare for attention, but keep it professional for the iffy customers.

i like that 2...flipping the blue and white...hmmm

thanks:goodjob:

[Kelly]

I like #2 but only if you changed the color's a little. Like I would probably do white font on the blue. #4 is my next fav.

[Killer]

probably 4... but maybe put a picture of a car you've actually detailed....


personally though i don't like the name "mobile madness" or the package options...

it sounds a bit childish... in all honesty..

to me you need to make it a bit more professional sounding if you want people to take you seriously.

it would help you get a better range of clients imo.. not just the "dope fresh fly" ones.... ;) how many 45+ yr old white men are gonna call you and say " yo man.. let me get THE MAD son!"

[Sammich]

probably 4... but maybe put a picture of a car you've actually detailed....


personally though i don't like the name "mobile madness" or the package options...

it sounds a bit childish... in all honesty..

to me you need to make it a bit more professional sounding if you want people to take you seriously.

it would help you get a better range of clients imo.. not just the "dope fresh fly" ones.... ;) how many 45+ yr old white men are gonna call you and say " yo man.. let me get THE MAD son!"
3 - #2
5 - #4

lol thanks for the constructive criticism, i guess i'm trying to stand out right now because so many of the detailers locally have practically the same name and i've been with this name for a while now, just now trying to start getting it going again because work has been slow and im off on fridays now, i'd rather keep my name, but i can see changing the names of the options.

i was also thinking about putting up a picture of a car i've actually done too...ill see what my brother says about taking a pic of his truck. thanks killer +99:goodjob:

[Frög]

I like option 1.. Clean and simple.. Don't really like the pic of the evo for that flyer..

[Sammich]

i was kind of thinking if i place that evo on there, it'd limit my clientel even more...i would like to post a picture of a nice stock bmw or something that is classy, yet sophisticated

1 - #1
3 - #2
5 - #4

[NVEOUS]

yea that would be alot better than the evo.

[AirMax95]

i was kind of thinking if i place that evo on there, it'd limit my clientel even more...i would like to post a picture of a nice stock bmw or something that is classy, yet sophisticated

1 - #1
3 - #2
5 - #4

Yeah, use a Caddy CTS/E-Class Benz/Maxipad/TL

[Sammich]

Yeah, use a Caddy CTS/E-Class Benz/Maxipad/TL

lol are you serious about a maxima...you know what...i forgot my mom just bought a blue infiniti i-35, car was freaking beautiful when i was finished with it.....*evil grin*

[AirMax95]

A new 09 Max.....yes.

[Sammich]

i havent done a new maxima..i've done tundras, i35s, maximas accords, buicks, mercury tracers....i cant think of what else...

[Killer]

3 - #2
5 - #4

lol thanks for the constructive criticism, i guess i'm trying to stand out right now because so many of the detailers locally have practically the same name and i've been with this name for a while now, just now trying to start getting it going again because work has been slow and im off on fridays now, i'd rather keep my name, but i can see changing the names of the options.

i was also thinking about putting up a picture of a car i've actually done too...ill see what my brother says about taking a pic of his truck. thanks killer +99:goodjob:

no problem man.. if you need help brainstorming or anything lmk... glad you took that as i meant it.. for the constructive part!!!

[Sammich]

no problem man.. if you need help brainstorming or anything lmk... glad you took that as i meant it.. for the constructive part!!!

yea i mean i've thought about everything you said prior to your saying it, but its like, everyone is so generic, why not step out the box...thats teh BIG reason on teh name selection, i can do something different with the package options, i just have to think of something else creative:thinking:

[Princess12]

I like option #4 the best.

Is this a company you are just starting? Or have you already developed a strong customer base?

Just my personal opinion, but I think I would reconsider the names of your company and the packages you have available so you can market to more individuals. The names you have chosen seem to limit your company to a much younger age group. If I had to choose between, for example, "Elite Mobile Detail" and "Mobile Madness," I would have to choose "Elite."

Creativity doesn't have to be so "young." Maybe choose a theme that will open up your marketing field?

[Sammich]

I like option #4 the best.

Is this a company you are just starting? Or have you already developed a strong customer base?

Just my personal opinion, but I think I would reconsider the names of your company and the packages you have available so you can market to more individuals. The names you have chosen seem to limit your company to a much younger age group. If I had to choose between, for example, "Elite Mobile Detail" and "Mobile Madness," I would have to choose "Elite."

Creativity doesn't have to be so "young." Maybe choose a theme that will open up your marketing field?

that name makes me wanna change..care if i use it?

*edit* and no i dont have a strong customer base, i always kind of did it on the side, but now i have way more time and have an opportunity to get it off its feet right now

[Princess12]

that name makes me wanna change..care if i use it?

Lol!

Go for it! I don't mind one bit. It was just a quick idea I made up as an example, but you are more than welcome to use it!

[DynamicSound]

Out of the ones pictured, I like number 4 first, the number 3.

[Sammich]

thanks^

i'm leaning more towards number one right now for sophistication purposes unless the i35 turns out well

[ilovemyhonda.]

# 4

[Sammich]

thanks missy

[slostang]

come down to teh aye! i needs your services.

[NVEOUS]

already got a customer lol

[Sammich]

come down to teh aye! i needs your services.

lol i'm thinking of new package names now...

my mobile prices would definitely have to include gas on that one though:lmfao: ...unless of course i move down there:ninja:

[ilovemyhonda.]

Welcome.

[slostang]

lol i'm thinking of new package names now...

my mobile prices would definitely have to include gas on that one though:lmfao: ...unless of course i move down there:ninja:

the varsity package? :police:

[NVEOUS]

the varsity package? :police:
Then you could hand your flyers out to the cops too! :lmfao:

[oneSLOWex]

#1 has my vote

[stillaneon]

I like option 1.. Clean and simple.. Don't really like the pic of the evo for that flyer..

Agreed, you need something luxerious or exotic. No one gives a shit about an evo (unless your brazilian). But a classy bimmer or mercedes:rolleyes:


Mobile Madness just doesn't sound like a detailing company, It has a ring, just not what I think of when I think of washing my car.

You might want some more options under the additional part.

Maybe like a fragrance thing. When you put options (being plural) consumers want more than one choice. Even if it is something small like 5 scents (i.e. new car, Cherry, Pina Colada, Pine, Melon), it makes the customer feel like they have the choice. And you can buy the strong fragrance stuff for like 3.00 a bottle and sell it for 1.00 extra.

Just think of things you can upsell.

And whatever layout you decide on, make sure you get cards that match. And be sure to leave a card in each car.....

[Killer]

yea i mean i've thought about everything you said prior to your saying it, but its like, everyone is so generic, why not step out the box...thats teh BIG reason on teh name selection, i can do something different with the package options, i just have to think of something else creative:thinking:


lol do the KARATE KID THEME


and have a wax on... and wax off... option... lirl!!!

[Sammich]

btwn killer and slovic...yall some funny sumbishes lol...im taking the flyers down today on this thread, but for those that contributed and threw me some ideas, thanks and i got to rep most of you, not all though

[slostang]

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t303/kzorzi88/norbit.jpg

[Sammich]

we got sammiches

[slostang]

we got sammiches

p nut butta?

[Frög]

Just post a super car.. Like a F430 or Carrera GT..

[Sammich]

u would.... lol

[Slow Motion]

I can see no pics.........

[Sammich]

I can see no pics.........

i took them down...its going under renovation right now:D

[Atlblkz06]

All options are blank.

[Slow Motion]

i took them down...its going under renovation right now:D

Oh ok. You best not take to long with it or I'll find you again and put a dent on the passenger side door again.:ninja: