Anyone an english major or good at writing?

[Ed]

help me re-write this:

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter the following month, the president decided to call a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss strategies for addressing problems highlighted by the research team.

winrar gets +19.

kthx

[Scotsman]

i was gonna do it , but idc about the +19 (weaksos)

[Ed]

i was gonna do it , but idc about the +19 (weaksos)

then don't, im not begging you.

[Scotsman]

then don't, im not begging you.

lol , do your own damn homework

[Ed]

lol , do your own damn homework

i haz ia to halp. gtfo kthx

[Scotsman]

i haz ia to halp. gtfo kthx

buhahahahaha

[Echonova]

help me re-write this:

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter the following month, the president decided to call a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss strategies for addressing problems highlighted by the research team.

winrar gets +19.

kthx

AFturr dee studie wuz compleet-ed bi da reserch kRew N da rezults weer publichd N da cumpanie newZledder da folowing mth, da pres de-sided two kall a meating uf all old manigers 2 dizcus stratergeries four addy problemz hi-lighted bi Da Nastyist Whipz kRew!!!!!

[Ed]

how did i know i wasnt gonna get a straight answer....

where the fuck is qd

[LizBiz]

I'm an English Major.....lets see what I can do.

[WTF?]

^ lol

[Echonova]

I'm an English Major.....lets see what I can do.

Oh Lawd


I lub j00 Liz

[Ed]

I'm an English Major.....lets see what I can do.

thats right woman....

when you're done get your ass back to the kitchen. no woman should be allowed in schools anyway, unless it's for a cooking, washing/ironing, cleaning major.

[Scotsman]

thats right woman....

when you're done get your ass back to the kitchen. no woman should be allowed in schools anyway, unless it's for a cooking, washing/ironing, cleaning major.

oh no you didnt

[Ed]

lawl.

i luv you liz.

[Echonova]

According to Microsoft Word 2007 it's correct. Bill Gates>college professor

[Ed]

the sentence is correct, it's just too wordy.

[Echonova]

After the study was completed by the research team the month prior, the results were published in the company newsletter. The president decided to call a meeting of all senior management to strategize for addressing problems areas highlighted by the research team.

[LizBiz]

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter the following month, the president decided to call a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss strategies for addressing problems highlighted by the research team.

Upon the completion of the results strategically prepared by the research team, the finalized results were published in the company newsletter for the following month. The president organized a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss objective strategies for addressing issues emphasized by the research team.

BAM!!!

[LizBiz]

TOO WORDY!?!?! You can NEVER have enough words......my bad....I added more words LOL

[Echonova]

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter the following month, the president decided to call a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss strategies for addressing problems highlighted by the research team.

Upon the completion of the results strategically prepared by the research team, the finalized results were published in the company newsletter for the following month. The president organized a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss objective strategies for addressing issues emphasized by the research team.

BAM!!!

And he thought it was wordy before...

Too slow I win

[Ed]

i heartz you.

[LizBiz]

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter the following month, the president decided to call a meeting of all senior level managers to discuss strategies for addressing problems highlighted by the research team.

Less words:

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter, the president decided to call a meeting to address problems highlighted by the research team.

[Ed]

Revise the following wordy or choppy sentences into one coherent, effective sentence.\

this is what the instructions say, i think it looks good.

[Echonova]

Ah.... I put a period in mine, but if you change it to a comma it's still grammatically correct.

[LizBiz]

Revise the following wordy or choppy sentences into one coherent, effective sentence.\

this is what the instructions say, i think it looks good.

Directions are awesome.

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter, the president decided to call a meeting to address problems highlighted by the research team.

That's 1 sentence!!!! woot!!

[Echonova]

Directions are awesome.

After the study was completed by the research team and the results were published in the company newsletter, the president decided to call a meeting to address problems highlighted by the research team.

That's 1 sentence!!!! woot!!

That ain't bad

[Echonova]

I like how Ed gave directions AFTER the fact... That was a nice touch.

[LizBiz]

I like how Ed gave directions AFTER the fact... That was a nice touch.

I know right!!!!

[Scotsman]

Ed you are gay for lockin this