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  1. 02-20-2006, 01:21 PM #1
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    this is due for my class really soon. Just wanted to see what you guys think. Only review the paper, not the writer.
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  2. 02-21-2006, 06:52 PM #2
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    the middle paragraph is really long, maybe try to segment it as that might help w/ continuity
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