My first rap..........lol........READ!!!!

[Marta Mike]

Ok so i write a lot, but never wrote a rap. So i decided to write a rap. This was very quick probably 10min or so on this. Just curious what you guys think. Feel free to post up....i know the flames re coming-lol.......Here ya go.



Ima child of God, and a son of a man, ima real ni66a, with a ****in masta plan. Im a young mutha trying to live off luck. Ima broke ass ni66a, striving for the next buck, So **** all tha hatas, I got the burner riding on me, tucked under the seat ready to send you to granny . Some ni66as might doubt, not knowing a ni66a real. I guess we"ll see, when sh!t gets trill. Bc im ready for the fight and im ready for the war, c0ck it one time and i open up the door. Open the door to the safe, cuz im bout to rob you blind, open your ****ing mouth and u gonna see whats on my mind.

I done told you once and ive told you before, ni66as dont know marta, they think hes a whore. But i aint a pu55y i dont sit back and get ****ed, I f@cks the pu55y and then i take the buck! Holla at the ni66a buck bc we know 5.0's a lame, that ni66a got tha vitamin water gettin to his brain. But back to the story cuz this sh!t bout me, i dont give a f@ck what you think, only i know me

I aint a hypocrite, and certainly aint no b!tch. Sit back, watch yo tone, b!tch suck my ****! Didnt see that cummin did you, You takes the shots. You be nice, and ill show you what i got. I got money in my left, everything else in my right, I flip this sh!t a day at a time and call it a night. Some call it a bird, i call it a bee, niggaz after the goods they come see me! I aint a thug, I aint G, but ima make sure these mutha ****as know me. Polo on monday button up friday, leave yo b!tch at the club and you know she coming my way.

I dont flip bricks, but i do flip blocks, turbo on that b!tch, the sh!t dont stop. Hataz hatin cuz im reppin da north side, but its all good cuz a ni66a still gon ride. Ride this b!tch out like a caddy on flat tires. Busit baby on my side, call me plies. I dont rock white tees, but i pop white collas, f@ck being a thug, im doin it for the dollas. I do it for my fam, i do it for the A, I do it fo myself so watch what you say. Cuz ill leave you shiny like mr clean, ill leave you lost, like mr bean. Ross is the boss, and T.i. is the king, i guess that leaves somewhere in between............. nah mean?

[_Christian_]

Off topic: Saw you driving on alpharetta hwy last week. I'm friends with dubssti and sicstang. I like the fox

[Catnip]

off topic: CJ is gay.

[_Christian_]

lol

[81911SC]

If you say n1gger, can I?

[Marta Mike]

If you say n1gger, can I?

If that makes you feel better, knock yourself out-lol. But i never said n1gger LOL

[BABY J]

If that makes you feel better, knock yourself out-lol. But i never said n1gger LOL

You never said what??

[Marta Mike]

You never said what??

the N word as white people would say

[willum14pb]

[RandomGuy]

how stereotypical

[BABY J]

the N word as white people would say

I am not sure what word you are referring to. Is it THIS one below (as quoted by some1 in this thread)?

If that makes you feel better, knock yourself out-lol. But i never said n1gger LOL

^^ Is THAT the word that you don't say?

[00CelicaGT]

rap is not for u my friend. stick wit poetry or wat ever u were writing brfore.

[Imadaman]

sounded pretty decent,i mean from the newer rap I've heard,it don't take much to make it.ha

[Psycho]

The 5 greatest rappers of all time:
Dylon
Dylon
Dylon
Dylon
and Dylon
I spit hot fire.

[Lucky DAWG]

Ok so i write a lot, but never wrote a rap. So i decided to write a rap. This was very quick probably 10min or so on this. Just curious what you guys think. Feel free to post up....i know the flames re coming-lol.......Here ya go.



Ima child of God, and a son of a man, ima real ni66a, with a ****in masta plan. Im a young mutha trying to live off luck. Ima broke ass ni66a, striving for the next buck, So **** all tha hatas, I got the burner riding on me, tucked under the seat ready to send you to granny . Some ni66as might doubt, not knowing a ni66a real. I guess we"ll see, when sh!t gets trill. Bc im ready for the fight and im ready for the war, c0ck it one time and i open up the door. Open the door to the safe, cuz im bout to rob you blind, open your ****ing mouth and u gonna see whats on my mind.

I done told you once and ive told you before, ni66as dont know marta, they think hes a whore. But i aint a pu55y i dont sit back and get ****ed, I f@cks the pu55y and then i take the buck! Holla at the ni66a buck bc we know 5.0's a lame, that ni66a got tha vitamin water gettin to his brain. But back to the story cuz this sh!t bout me, i dont give a f@ck what you think, only i know me

I aint a hypocrite, and certainly aint no b!tch. Sit back, watch yo tone, b!tch suck my ****! Didnt see that cummin did you, You takes the shots. You be nice, and ill show you what i got. I got money in my left, everything else in my right, I flip this sh!t a day at a time and call it a night. Some call it a bird, i call it a bee, niggaz after the goods they come see me! I aint a thug, I aint G, but ima make sure these mutha ****as know me. Polo on monday button up friday, leave yo b!tch at the club and you know she coming my way.

I dont flip bricks, but i do flip blocks, turbo on that b!tch, the sh!t dont stop. Hataz hatin cuz im reppin da north side, but its all good cuz a ni66a still gon ride. Ride this b!tch out like a caddy on flat tires. Busit baby on my side, call me plies. I dont rock white tees, but i pop white collas, f@ck being a thug, im doin it for the dollas. I do it for my fam, i do it for the A, I do it fo myself so watch what you say. Cuz ill leave you shiny like mr clean, ill leave you lost, like mr bean. Ross is the boss, and T.i. is the king, i guess that leaves somewhere in between............. nah mean?

For pretty much all of it, and especially the part bolded....


... You are a huge tool for posting a rap on Import Atlanta.
Especially one that rambles about getting money, rocking white tees, and getting your **** sucked.







First bottles on me

Drink up!

[yogi08]

cant believe someone posted a rap... it would be differnt if you acually recorded it, but me pretending i was a rapper for a minute to see how it sounded... made me look dumb. hahahaha

half the **** you posted was so off the wall and weird and stupid, im not sure what to think of this anymore.

[BABY J]

every1 knows that the REAL IA rappers are here:

FREESTYLE FRIDAY'S

[MistaCee]

The 5 greatest rappers of all time:
Dylon
Dylon
Dylon
Dylon
and Dylon
I spit hot fire.

Lirl!

You don't want some of diss hot fire?

[n00bsrus]

gotta love the word TRILL. where the fsck did that sh!t come from anyways!??!!? you're better than soulja boy, congratulations

[MongolPup]

Lirl!

You don't want some of diss hot fire?

YOU'RE TOO CLOSE MON!