im gonna be the bigger man and call you weiner and be done with this whole thing
thanks for the reps weiner
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im gonna be the bigger man and call you weiner and be done with this whole thing
thanks for the reps weiner
lolol @ weiner
I'd like to argue with you but I can't get past the grammar.
Sue me, I'm an honest-to-god English major.
Anyway can I proofread this for you? In the first paragraph I caught first person, misuse of commas, a sentence fragment that ended without punctuation (or a run on sentence, I can't make it out) and passive voice. It hurt my brain too much so I quit there.
sorry i'll run it through spell check real quick if you want but first person staysQuote:
Originally Posted by Vayda
updated first post after spell check
But teh grammer!! ZOMG. RUN ON SENTENCES MAKE BABY JESUS CRY!!!!!
im not going to seriously toy with it till next weekend sorry can't make everyone happyQuote:
Originally Posted by Vayda
Well let me know when you want the grammar corrected.
Seriously. I do this for a living.
hey man if you want to please by all means be my guess. anything to help boost my grade.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vayda
my opinion...ask a republican....:goodjob: I agree with you too much to make a decent arguement
Dude....write me a paper about college life pertaining to one or a few experiences and about how it differs from what you thought it would be. i'll paypal you $5...oh yea its due tomorrow.
I wouldn't do it for anything less than 15 and its Super Bowl Sunday. Had you asked me yesterday I probably would have done it.Quote:
Originally Posted by d-ninja