Theres a few hickups and a few typos, but heres the first one.
http://www.drivenminds.net/downloads...troduction.mov
it's a big file, and about 15 minutes long.
Opnions please.
Learning to Drift: Part 1
Theres a few hickups and a few typos, but heres the first one.
http://www.drivenminds.net/downloads...troduction.mov
it's a big file, and about 15 minutes long.
Opnions please.
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Just fuckin with ya, its D/Ling right now...
D/L'd it, watched it, quick review: not a total waste of time.
Rob, heres my "film" critque: You know how to set up the story line, you know how the natural progression of a film should work, you understand how to integrate shots and cuts.
My "technical" critique: Great songs, E.T. was a good one to open with, don't mute it so much when you pull it down, it loses continuity. Crazy Game is a good song too, but I'm not so sure it fits. The song is kinda "hey we're hangin out sittin on our asses bein stupid" but (from what I gather) your intention with this story is "hey were hangin out driving our cars bein stupid and fast." I guess I wouldnt use it with all the in car cams and stuff, or at least not as long as you did. Your marquees scroll a little too fast and if you're publishing this solely on the internet, you need to find a way to not compress it so much or make the font larger, it was mostly illegible. Some of the shots lingered a little too long, some didnt make a whole lot of sense if you werent there. I know it looks like a lot of "i didn't like it" but it really was enjoyable to watch. Iron out a few things before the next segment and it'll be pretty fuckin cool. Great job man, I can't wait to watch the next one!
P.S.-I filmed at The Untouchable, and you used some of my shots, wheres my name in the "Special Thanks" you ungrateful bastard!
i will watch this tonight when i get home
:boobies:
downloaded it but cant watch it right now.....girl is sleeping "your being too loud" from what i saw its got a good intro
i agree 100%. great motive. not a bad job for a first endevor. a lil misleading in the title. i kinda thought this was gonna be an instructional not a documentery. in the middle when the racing starts should have narated the scrolling text. 1 this would have kept the watchers attention durring that long period before the race starts. 2 keeps with the theme of natration in a documentory. but overall i enjoyed the movie cant wait to see #2!Originally Posted by uberdude328i
D/L'd it, watched it, quick review: not a total waste of time.
Rob, heres my "film" critque: You know how to set up the story line, you know how the natural progression of a film should work, you understand how to integrate shots and cuts.
My "technical" critique: Great songs, E.T. was a good one to open with, don't mute it so much when you pull it down, it loses continuity. Crazy Game is a good song too, but I'm not so sure it fits. The song is kinda "hey we're hangin out sittin on our asses bein stupid" but (from what I gather) your intention with this story is "hey were hangin out driving our cars bein stupid and fast." I guess I wouldnt use it with all the in car cams and stuff, or at least not as long as you did. Your marquees scroll a little too fast and if you're publishing this solely on the internet, you need to find a way to not compress it so much or make the font larger, it was mostly illegible. Some of the shots lingered a little too long, some didnt make a whole lot of sense if you werent there. I know it looks like a lot of "i didn't like it" but it really was enjoyable to watch. Iron out a few things before the next segment and it'll be pretty fuckin cool. Great job man, I can't wait to watch the next one!
^^^Dood, you have a shit-ton of WRXs, give me one!!!
yea... I had originally planned on breaking down what we were doing to initiate the drifts and sustain them, but somehow in the heat of early morning editing I forgot to do it.
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