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Nemesis
09-24-2006, 09:20 PM
Took this later in the evening as a train passed by.

Please keep comments mature, and constructive. Photo was processed to add a little more effect.


Thanks!

http://www.importatlanta.com/nemesis/misc/crit1.jpg

tony
09-24-2006, 09:21 PM
Very cool, I like it

A.P. Photography
09-24-2006, 09:21 PM
Nice shot Jorge, love the feel of the photo

Nemesis
09-24-2006, 09:22 PM
thanks man, I was emo today :( hahaha

A.P. Photography
09-24-2006, 09:36 PM
you were emo and I was worried to death. Started up the studio today for the first time.

Dominic49
09-24-2006, 09:41 PM
nice emo pic

need to get rid of the blueness of the train....

imbosile
09-24-2006, 09:48 PM
thats pretty badass

OG-Skinny
09-24-2006, 09:59 PM
"Dedication is the way to sucess"

quickdodge®
09-24-2006, 10:03 PM
That's one long ass train car. Later, QD.

uproot
09-24-2006, 10:11 PM
dude, thats an awesome picture :goodjob:

Nemesis
09-24-2006, 10:11 PM
need to get rid of the blueness of the train....


I would have liked to have seen the shot to with a freeze frame of the train also, but Im thinking it might have just made it out like the train was stopped on the tracks, no motion, no feeling behing it maybe. Longer controlled exposure , even though Im standing still the train is still rushing by and you can feel it almost.



That avatar is ridiculous btw. :lmfao:

quickdodge®
09-24-2006, 10:33 PM
That's one long ass train car. Later, QD.

I agree. Reps to you for that comment. Later, QD.

BluesClues
09-24-2006, 10:38 PM
That is a cool ass pic!!!! I love the feeling of it! You have great talent

ORGANIZATIONXIII
09-25-2006, 04:01 AM
its.......





EMO GEORGE!!!!
I like it... could've been nicer w/o you in it.. LIRL!

N/A EK
09-25-2006, 08:57 AM
nice

The Golden Child
09-25-2006, 11:10 AM
maybe you should do one with yourself cutting your wrist how about them apples ..

BYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAA !!!

The Golden Child
09-25-2006, 11:11 AM
no but seriously i like it its cool how the trees show behind the train and the perfect lighting and the shadows are just perfect mucho props for you jorge ..

now wheres my kimbahp and bul go gi ??

BYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAA !!!

Bballjamal
09-25-2006, 11:30 AM
Street critique: Shit looks cool and would've been cooler if you were smokin a cigarette or something.

Amatuer Photog Critique: The increased shadows and darkness adds to the photo tons! The picture really doesn't say anything to me but that could've easily been fixed with something as simple as a cigarette or raggy clothes. I would've gotten a sense of a long day or a somewhat hard times type of feel if you know what I mean. Either way the actual photo came out damn good. Care to post the original so I can see how much post work was put in?

Dirty Octopus™
09-25-2006, 12:12 PM
I love it!
sugoi! :goodjob:

BrB, Da Greatest Shonuff :yes:

Nitro
09-25-2006, 12:27 PM
niceeeeeeeeeeee :D

thinkfast®
09-25-2006, 01:22 PM
light a blunt then take it.. I'll do the first shot if u want lol

The Yousef
09-25-2006, 01:26 PM
:goodjob:

it's peaceful...

OG-Skinny
09-25-2006, 01:39 PM
George, are you sure your not a vagabond?

Maniaç
09-25-2006, 03:03 PM
Dude that picture looks hot, for real man.

Tiff-O-Bitties
09-25-2006, 04:56 PM
Very nice George