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FDslider
02-20-2006, 12:21 PM
this is due for my class really soon. Just wanted to see what you guys think. Only review the paper, not the writer.
yudalicious
02-21-2006, 05:52 PM
the middle paragraph is really long, maybe try to segment it as that might help w/ continuity
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