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swollix
12-30-2008, 05:05 PM
More practice. I need some critique on photography, not so much the car.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3198/3150313684_df587f0625_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3128/3149506393_4c52356a3e_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3254/3149506461_8569dd5d56_o.jpg
osnap
12-30-2008, 05:07 PM
#2 wins.
csmiths
12-30-2008, 05:22 PM
they all suck. new years at our place. you coming
quickdodge®
12-30-2008, 05:23 PM
Be original and shoot straight on without the stupid angles. Later, QD.
lowazzcord
12-30-2008, 05:26 PM
there pretty good
swollix
12-30-2008, 05:27 PM
they all suck. new years at our place. you coming
Maybe, any girls this time? (Josh and Kurshid don't count).
Halfwit
12-30-2008, 05:33 PM
brighten up a little bit. they are hard to look at being soo dark, even though it makes it look more detailed. focuses eyes on too much.
and i know you didnt want car critique, but damn i cant stop looking at the dent in your passenger door. in all the pictures. lol
GSRteg®
12-30-2008, 05:39 PM
Looking good and love the BMW
swollix
12-30-2008, 05:42 PM
and i know you didnt want car critique, but damn i cant stop looking at the dent in your passenger door. in all the pictures. lol
someone must have kicked it there, there were no dents when I bought the car. :( Still very good for original bodywork and paint on a 1995 car though.
Think you should make one thread and keep on posting pictures there.
jr4mny
12-30-2008, 07:38 PM
that's sexy as hell
mirz833
12-30-2008, 07:47 PM
not bad
Professor Swagger
12-30-2008, 08:31 PM
is it just me or is the car a hint of gray?
DVSRX-7
12-30-2008, 08:58 PM
shot one from the front of the car or the rear like this one i took at the last old skool meet.. took them with my phone but ou can always try it
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq23/TriangleHearts/DSC01791.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq23/TriangleHearts/DSC01792.jpg
Dwisforme05
12-30-2008, 09:37 PM
backdrop. i think the backdrop in a photo is very important. i would find a better location. like qd said try some straight on shots, with a really strong focus. i like angles , and your angles are definatly working for you. nice clean images tho!
heres what i mean on the front shots. i dont think this is a perfect example but you get what i mean.
http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa164/dwisforme05/IMG_8888.jpg
your car has a beautiful front end. put some emphasis on it.
Dwisforme05
12-30-2008, 09:39 PM
shot one from the front of the car or the rear like this one i took at the last old skool meet.. took them with my phone but ou can always try it
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq23/TriangleHearts/DSC01791.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq23/TriangleHearts/DSC01792.jpg
i cant stand those angles. might be a personal thing but why cut off the other half of the car. looks retarted.
Random Hero
12-30-2008, 10:43 PM
I agree with the background comment.
The Yousef
12-30-2008, 10:48 PM
Maybe, any girls this time? (Josh and Kurshid don't count).
LOL! :lmfao: :lmao:
and the car is ghey... :fruit:
Terror
12-30-2008, 11:27 PM
Be original and shoot straight on without the stupid angles. Later, QD.
As i can understand where your coming from, i think in this case the angles do the photos justice.
EDIT: and car looks beautiful alex.
EJ_Allmota
12-30-2008, 11:39 PM
The PP is nice, your focus is sharp and im personally feeling the tone of these images.. location is key which everyone one said but i dig the shots.. Question though, why were they shots at F9??
swollix
12-30-2008, 11:48 PM
The PP is nice, your focus is sharp and im personally feeling the tone of these images.. location is key which everyone one said but i dig the shots.. Question though, why were they shots at F9??
still new haven't really messed with the F-stop much. I realize they should have been shot at f/3.5 or something lower. :thinking:
amandDA
12-31-2008, 12:30 AM
look good 2 me
CHADbee
01-01-2009, 04:41 PM
More practice. I need some critique on photography, not so much the car.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3198/3150313684_df587f0625_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3128/3149506393_4c52356a3e_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3254/3149506461_8569dd5d56_o.jpg
1-the white gravel on the left draws my eyes away from the car
2-the sign poking out from the windshield bothers me
3-the signs, poles, utility boxes bother me.
the ground should have been swept around the car, the last two are the worst cause of the straw right in front of the car. the composition is perfect though, i really dig the way you framed the car.
puregroove
01-01-2009, 05:33 PM
1-the white gravel on the left draws my eyes away from the car
2-the sign poking out from the windshield bothers me
3-the signs, poles, utility boxes bother me.
the ground should have been swept around the car, the last two are the worst cause of the straw right in front of the car. the composition is perfect though, i really dig the way you framed the car.
reps! You have an eye. The cool thing is, there are two. :D :lmfao:
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