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blacknightteg
03-23-2008, 09:10 PM
so i need help writing a radio commercial for a communications class that i am taking in school. i need som idea's cuz i cant really think of doing anything off the top of my head. It needs to follow monroe's motivated sequence if any of you know what that is. It needs to attract attention, show need, satisfaction, make the listener visualize the reason for needing it and have an action plan. please give me some ideas!

i was thinkin about doing like a add for a certain car or something. but i dunno how i would go about that.

Echonova
03-23-2008, 09:27 PM
SUNDAY! SUNDAY!! SUNDAY!!!!! SEE SHIRLEY MOULDOWNY SHAKE HANDS WITH THE DEVIL AT THE GATES OF HELL. THIS WEEKEND ONLY AT THE GEORGIA FLEA MARKET AND ANTIQUE SHOP. 10 DOLLARS GETS YOU IN TO SEE ALL THE GROUND POUNDING ACTION! ACTION!! ACTION!!!

blacknightteg
03-23-2008, 09:32 PM
lol ahahahahahaha seriously

redrumracer
03-23-2008, 09:49 PM
simple do something like a toothpaste commercial. talk about teeth not being white and what not and also germs that reside in the mouth. then give the solution(your product), then a little thing at the end saying how great the product is or how it helped them achieve a great first impression. also at the beginning ask the consumer a question to get there attn and engaged in the commercial.

blacknightteg
03-23-2008, 09:50 PM
hmm toothpaste, thats actually a good idea. i didnt think about that.

The Ninja
03-23-2008, 10:25 PM
I liked Echonova's idea better.

redrumracer
03-23-2008, 10:38 PM
I liked Echonova's idea better.
its a good idea but doesnt have a broad enough appeal. and if you wanted to do drag racing John Force would be a better name to do just for the fact that alot more people now about him. does it get attn? yes, but it can also come across as rude or in your face. show satisfaction? absofuckinlutely. show need? not really. also there is no real struggle or conflict. so no solution