Feed back on Quick chop.

[HachiDori]

Did this signature about 30 minutes ago. Would like to get some feed back on it. Im also doing another one.
http://www.importatlanta.com/upload/files/135/IMG_0015.JPG
^^Original
http://www.importatlanta.com/upload/files/135/finale.jpg

Thanks in advance

[therealgoon9]

It's bark

[Jecht]

Dark, has that pattern on it, looks like its trying to be artistic but isn't. No offense.

[HachiDori]

None taken asked for feedback.

The patern I liked because It looked like a carbon overlay of somesort. The highlights of the lettering.

Thanks for the feedback